- On today's Cold Email Teardown we are talking
about selling conversion rate optimization services.
And we're gonna go through a three email drip.
And we've got actual stats, so I'm excited, here we go.
Hey Alex, first off I wanted to say I've watched a ton
of your videos and let you know how useful they are.
Thanks, that's a guy that's appreciative.
You know, I'm not saying anything bad about you,
but when are you gonna leave a comment, huh?
If you have left a comment already, thank you.
This is a new style I'm trying called intimacy.
I'm gonna just make aggressive eye contact with the camera,
and ask for you to leave good comments.
This teardown's gone off the rails already.
So, first off I just wanted to say
I've watched a ton of your videos.
I know how useful they are.
I set up a cold email campaign
to help out a mate whose freelancing.
He's offering conversion rate
optimization to help digital agencies.
Unfortunately, I haven't had
that good of a response for him.
Here we got 127 emails out, 79% sent, 24% opened,
0% clicked, 3% replied, 10% bounced.
So, 24% open rate is extremely low.
That means we're gonna look at the subject line.
Then from there we'll look at the other topics.
But he sent all three emails.
It's a three sequence drip, and he's
using Mailshake to send it out.
All three response he's had were negative by the way.
So subject line, I would say question
about CRO reads as question about crow
to somebody that doesn't know anything
about conversion rate optimization.
Which actually brings us to a bigger point, acronyms.
If you're using an acronym in your email
you better make sure that everyone knows
what you're talking about because even
as a marketer if you're not thinking conversion rate
optimization every single day you might read that as crow,
and you might not open the email
as evidenced by the 25% open rate.
Or you might just say question about CRO,
and think, oh, my company's not named CRO,
I'm not gonna open the email.
There's a million misunderstandings
that could happen by putting an acronym in the email.
So I would actually just test question about company,
and make that a custom field here.
That's the subject line I would test,
and let's jump into the email.
Hi name, your X client project is one
of the marketing projects I've seen!
This is everything that's wrong with cold email right here.
If you're not customizing this line you can't say stuff
like it's the best marketing project I've seen.
What does that even mean? What does that...
I'm a little peeved, all right?
If it's a good marketing project
you're complimenting them on results.
And if you're complimenting them
on their amazing ability to get results,
why would they need conversion rate optimization?
That's a general rule of thumb for all cold emails.
Don't compliment people on something that you're going
to say in the next line they're not doing great.
So, hey name, love the work you did
for this project, impressive.
Are you the best person to speak
with at this agency in relation to conversion rate
optimization training for your clients?
Are you the best person to speak at?
That's up to you as the sales guy
to find out if they're the best person.
Assume you're speaking to the right person,
and actually pitch them on your service.
I've helped two dozen agencies in the last year
with conversion rate optimization, hang on.
There were some case studies, however,
that stood out, especially the website designs.
If you're a conversion rate expert,
and you're looking at their sites,
and you're finding conversion problems,
that would be the time to reach out.
So I'm gonna assume that's the frame of this email.
The lead choice here would be agencies
that have client projects and cases studies
that obviously look like they can be improved
with conversion rate optimization.
I've helped two dozen agencies in the last year
with conversion rate optimization for their clients,
and would love to do the same for your company.
If so, would you or nothing be interested
in knowing how CRO can increase agency revenue?
Do they know what CRO is, or do they not know what CRO is?
I'm gonna assume they know what conversion rate optimization
is, but don't know the acronym.
If that was the assumption you made it
doesn't make any sense to educate them
on CRO if they already know enough
at least to know what the acronym means.
It doesn't make any sense.
P.s. You can read a short blog about my tips
for the CRO course I teach for the CIM.
Again, CRO, CIM, I could Google CIM, but I'm not going to.
I'm just gonna delete it.
I've helped two dozen agencies,
and then maybe two agency names,
Fuzz, Fueled, in the last year
with conversion rate optimization for their clients
and would love to do the same for your company.
We do a two day on-site workshop
that will give you sales materials
and training to make more revenue selling conversion rate
optimization as an add-on service.
I would love to run through the details
on a quick call and see if there's a fit, thanks, Joe.
So, this is email one.
I would remove this as well just
because I don't know what the blog post is about,
and I don't know what CIM stands for.
Second email, hi, first name, I almost forgot
to send you my article from The Drum
on western versus eastern personalization and CRO.
P.s If you don't look after conversion rate optimization
or training your staff please feel free
to forward my email on to a relevant colleague.
I know this is what it says to do in Predictable Revenue.
People know how to use email a lot more
than they did when that book was written.
And they will forward it if it makes
sense for a colleague to look at it.
You don't have to ask for that forward, at least not here.
P.s. I almost forgot to send you my article.
It's disingenuous to say stuff like this in an email drip.
And they know it's an email drip
because you're sending it to marketing people.
They know about cold emails, so when you say
stuff like this was the greatest marketing project
I've ever seen, congratulations,
or I almost forgot to send this to you, here's my article,
they can see right through
that stuff, and it turns them off.
They're not gonna respond to an email like that.
Hey, first name, wanted to make sure this didn't get buried.
And I like this article, right?
Here's an article from The Drum on western
versus eastern personalization,
that's a great interesting article title,
in conversion rate optimization.
Mind if I send over a few times for a quick call?
The problem with sending this link in this email
is you're asking them now for two things, right?
Click the link and book a meeting
with me, instead of just one thing.
But if this article's really great,
I haven't read it, maybe send it.
If not just remove this and the email still works.
Now we're on to the third email,
the final email in the sequence.
Hi, first name, just wanted to check if you're interested
at all in CRO services or CRO training for your clients.
This requires no work from you,
we create the deck slides for your pitch.
Otherwise, I bid you good day and won't contact you again.
This comes off as too aggressive
in a really weird way, so I'd remove that otherwise.
Just wanted to check if you're
interested at all in CRO services.
Hi, first name, at this point I'll assume
you're not interested in adding conversion
rate optimization as a service this year.
If anything changes and you'd like to hear
how our training can increase company,
their agency name's, revenue and client sales conversion
please let me know, thanks, Joe.
And there's your email, there's your email drip.
Right here I'll put a link to download
this in the description as always.
Also, if you want us to do this
for your agency that's experiment27.com.
We write cold emails, we book meetings
with enterprise companies, and most importantly,
we find you enterprise companies to work with.
If you found this video valuable,
I would love if you would share it with a friend or two.
We're trying to hit 100,000 subs,
so every share helps the channel and helps me.
I'm Alex Berman, thanks.
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